*A more recent improvement I have made is that I no longer mention "So and So has once brought up the statement..." and use a little more straight-forward sentences instead.
*In addition, instead of asking questions as a hook, I now bring up quotes that can be related to the topic. *Transitions have also improved quite a bit, I now use academic terms as opposed to "Firstly, Secondly, Then, Finally..." etc. *Instead of being repetitive with words, I use synonyms instead, so a specific word is not repeated several times. *I am now able to properly justify my reasoning and explaining my perspective, instead of just stating what it is and what it means. |